1.en.12 Beautiful fall music to make you reflect on accuracy: correct mistakes

I have read your first 11 sentences about Liz and I am a bit disappointed. You certainly learnt a lot about her, but your writing is full of errors that MUST BE CORRECTED.

64 EYES SEE MORE THAN 2 

don’t you remember?

Well, so far it doem not seem to be working. Every one makes new mistakes and nobody seems to bother to correct the others.  I have copied the first 11 sentences you posted to the blog. I have highlighted in yellow all the sentences that have to be corrected: capital letters, wrong verbs, agreement problems, spelling mistakes, wrong tenses, wrong pronouns,  words missing… You have even transformed Liz into a man! 

I have not written the names of the people who made the mistakes. Let’s see if 64 eyes see more than 2. If I do not get the corrections before Monday, I will have to order 32 pair of glasses.

Listen to Vivaldi autumn  music to get inspiration to correct mistakes. The Music is from Vivaldi but the images are from New England, Liz’s homeland.

Write the number and post your correction to the blog.

4 Respostes to “1.en.12 Beautiful fall music to make you reflect on accuracy: correct mistakes”

  1. luciilopez Says:

    America, Spanish, She, Her written with Capital Letter.

    • Joana cb Says:

      America,Spanish, She, Her goes with capital letter.
      Is, younger, her, has.
      Is: Liz’s favourite animal is the Lion.
      Is: Her favourite Simpson’s character is Maggie.

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